I had laboured somewhat over Assignment 4, finding it difficult to pull together the various threads and concepts required to construct a major essay whilst job hunting through necessity and still working full time pending my imminent redundancy. However, I think I overcame the challenges to create a piece of writing that successfully conveys my ponderings around the crossovers between Land Art and photography.

My tutor feedback via Zoom was that the essay could stand as it is, should I choose to submit it unaltered. However, he also returned an annotated version of my essay with suggestions for my consideration. I had written in the first person for a personal perspective and he has suggested that I change to the third person. I can see that this makes for a more ‘academic’ piece of writing and intend to take up this suggestion. There are also suggestions on a couple of the opinions I raised, giving a different perspective. I will definitely review these and incorporate other viewpoints and considerations as well as looking at some of the suggested texts.